Instead of KirinTor+Secrets**

I think the deck is too slow and reliant on building a board in the late game.
Adding 8 4 drops instead of to the deck means you will definitely mill some cards after playing aluneth on 6 and almost get a good chain going with luna.
Vexcrow doesnt feel good when you run all of the 1 mana spells, it’s a definite cut from this list.
Its worth considering cards like flame geyser which can up your burst potential and be used with luna and aluneth to cycle more easily.
CounterSpell is an absolute neccesity if you want your board to survive to push damage. Explosive runes is just a powerhouse.
This list is definitely worse then current tempo mage.